What do you think of this story?

It was good, but confusing. You need to set a plot or setting. I thought they were like hobos who steal cigarettes and don't have a home and who are broke and really who are bad people. I think you need to say who everybody is and how old they are, otherwise anyone who reads it will be confused. Anyone who reads it would infer who everybody is and how old they are. For instance, I thought that Mora and Taz were young, such as, 8 or so. Then I thought that Bruno and Roslyn were 10-12 years old. I also thought that the police were looking for them and that the police were going to find them and kill them because they have stolen cigarettes. You might need to clarify more things. Get one of your friends to read it and see what they think. You might want to write more too because it kinda just ended with no explaining or anything. Overlook it. Revise it. Rewrite it, but save this copy in case you like something more that you wrote in here, but not in your rewritten one. This is my advice. Take it.